5 sentence challenge week 1

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10 Responses to 5 sentence challenge week 1

  1. kirsty says:

    Very good paragraph, I really liked the concept. brilliant!!!!

    • mfarmer says:

      Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed reading it. The children enjoyed writing their sentences, first by hand and then adding them to our blog. We hope to be taking part in this challenge throughout the year.
      Mrs Farmer

  2. mfarmer says:

    James, I am really pleased that you tried so hard with your spellings. I knew you could do it! I wonder where the lady is taking the dog?
    Ms Farmer

  3. Mrs Skinner says:

    Hello James!
    Wow! What brilliant sentences for 5SC this time. You have remembered ALL your capital letters and full stops and all the words you have used are spelt correctly. I hope you are really pleased with yourself!

  4. lennon says:

    Well done James you remembered all your full stops and you used a describing word aswell.

  5. Hannah says:

    I like the story . and you spelled every thing right.
    Hannah, Burravoe School

  6. Leo says:

    Well done James you have done really well but next time add some description what colour was the ladies dress???

  7. Rajsri says:

    James, your 5 sentence challenge was very good and you had nice grammar!!!
    Maybe you could tell us a bit more about the ducks and the little girl,

  8. blake says:

    Hi James!
    I like your work. It is awesome. You remembered your full stops and capital letters.

  9. James says:

    Thank you for all your great comments

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