Shay, you looked carefully at the picture provided and thought of 5 sentences to write about it. You tried very hard to sound out your words on your own. Well done remembering to add capital letters and full stops to some of your sentences. Remember to do this to all your sentences.
Ms Farmer
Hello Shay!
It is so lovely to see your work here on 5SC.
I really like the choices you have made of what to write about – delivering milk, the lady walking and my favourite feeding the ducks. You have tried really hard with your vocabulary so I hope to see more of your work being shared soon!
Well done Shay; you have looked carefully at the picture and written some great sentences about it. I can see that you have tried very hard with the spelling.
What a great poem, thank you for blogging this and sharing it with us.
Shay, you looked carefully at the picture provided and thought of 5 sentences to write about it. You tried very hard to sound out your words on your own. Well done remembering to add capital letters and full stops to some of your sentences. Remember to do this to all your sentences.
Ms Farmer
Hello Shay!
It is so lovely to see your work here on 5SC.
I really like the choices you have made of what to write about – delivering milk, the lady walking and my favourite feeding the ducks. You have tried really hard with your vocabulary so I hope to see more of your work being shared soon!
Well done shay you did very well you got most of you’re spellings right and you even put some full stops in.
Well done Shay, you have used several verbs in the present tense. You also have an adjective.
Well done Shay; you have looked carefully at the picture and written some great sentences about it. I can see that you have tried very hard with the spelling.