Elohim, you wrote out your sentences on your own in class and thought of great words to do with Autumn.
When it was time to type up your work, you worked with Mrs H. and she helped you with your spellings.
Hello Elohim,
You have written some lovely sentences about all of the beautiful leaves in Autumn. I love the colourful leaves – especially red and orange leaves. Is Autumn your favourite time of the year? It sounds as though Autumn is very beautiful where you live!
You have made your writing so interesting by telling me what you see, how it feels, and what you can hear – great work 🙂
Well done Elohim for telling me about autumn in this story. You have covered everything I think. Is it hot though or were you meaning when you are near a bonfire? You have used your senses well to make sure your writing is really creative. Keep up the good work!
Elohim, you wrote out your sentences on your own in class and thought of great words to do with Autumn.
When it was time to type up your work, you worked with Mrs H. and she helped you with your spellings.
Hello Elohim,
You have written some lovely sentences about all of the beautiful leaves in Autumn. I love the colourful leaves – especially red and orange leaves. Is Autumn your favourite time of the year? It sounds as though Autumn is very beautiful where you live!
You have made your writing so interesting by telling me what you see, how it feels, and what you can hear – great work 🙂
Thank you,
MrsP
Well done Elohim. You have thought of lots of things which you could see and hear in Autumn and written some super sentences. Keep it up!
Well done Elohim for telling me about autumn in this story. You have covered everything I think. Is it hot though or were you meaning when you are near a bonfire? You have used your senses well to make sure your writing is really creative. Keep up the good work!