Leah, you really tried hard with your spellings and I am really pleased you remembered to spell hear (with your ear) correctly!
You also remembered your capital letters and full stops. Well done!
Hello Leah,
Autumn sounds like a very busy and noisy time where you live. With the birds singing and hooting, and bonfires burning and the wind blowing – there is lots to see and hear!
Hello Leah!
I can see that you have really concentrated on your sentences for this story. You have remembered all about autumn as well with leaves falling down. I love to kick the leaves. Do you?
Leah, you really tried hard with your spellings and I am really pleased you remembered to spell hear (with your ear) correctly!
You also remembered your capital letters and full stops. Well done!
Hello Leah,
Autumn sounds like a very busy and noisy time where you live. With the birds singing and hooting, and bonfires burning and the wind blowing – there is lots to see and hear!
Great work,
Thank you,
MrsP
Well Done Leah! What lovely sentences. You have used a connective and really tried to describe what we can see and hear.
Hello Leah!
I can see that you have really concentrated on your sentences for this story. You have remembered all about autumn as well with leaves falling down. I love to kick the leaves. Do you?